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Here’s this weeks challenge:
“This weekend we’re asking for 30 of your own words plus the three following words for a total of 33 words.
Tether Loft Crown”
Lost my tether to consciousness .
The loft of my body fell.
Busted my crown open.
Blood was all over the gravel.
Blood in my eyes.
Gravel in my forehead.
This story is true.
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Liquid Poet 
i love scars and true stories…
and you.
I love scars too. I don’t know if I told you that. But of course I love you much much more than scars.
yeah i’d have to say you’re much better than scars…more fun:)
Yeah we have a lot fun. Even when we’re just sitting on the couch talking about sacks of potatoes and getting knocked out by them. I Love You.
🙂
🙂 I Love you. I will never be sad that I came here.
GOOD
And I’ll make sure you’re never sad that I came.
IIIMMMMpossible
That’s right. Same for me.
IINNNconcievable
Do you hear that sound? That’s the sound of the shrieking eels.
My name is Inigo Montoya
you killed my father
prepare to die..
R.O.U.S.’s They don’t exist. (chomp)
Ouch! The short sentences work great with the matter-of-fact tone.
thanks. it did hurt. but I have a cool scar that looks like a backwards question mark.
Ouch! Blood in my eyes – that’s gotta hurt!
Yeah but the gravel hurt most. we should learn from our ouches.
Yes. I learned as a little girl not to learn to ride my bike near my grandad’s huge, thorn-filled rose bushes!
Damn, that sounds worse.
The scars faded… Eventually! 🙂
Ouch. This has happened to my knees a few times.
lol good girls wear knee pads. seablackwithink said “Zoinks!”.
Yikes! Those images! And knowing it’s a true story just ups the eek factor.
lol, thanks. It wasn’t very fun.
Ouch… that was painful…only time I did similar was falling from I bicycle… but I had helmet…
That sucks. It was my fault though too many substances at once. ended up in the intensive care unit for 2 days because my blood pressure was so low. oh well it’s a good story. 🙂
Ah,falling & getting hurt is painful but natural too-the scars indicate the mistakes we made and help us remember the lessons learnt:-)Great piece!
That’s true I didn’t think of it that way. thanks for reading
:-)Many a times our readers see different things than how we writers intend and I find that perception very intriguing
The lovely human brain…
True!
As long as I don’t hurt myself when I pass out ( I’ve passed out about 30 times in my life.), I kinda enjoy it. It’s like leaving this world for a moment and when you come back everything feels strange.
Yikes… I think I did that once! Your story illustrates the graphic perfectly… or vice versa.
Passing out stories either end with laughing and a bump on the head or people panicking and blood.
What an awesome account of what must have been a frightening experience. I love that first line.
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